The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 to 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line chart describes the amount of expenditure on visitors to New Zealand that several
countries
from 1996 to 2014.
In general, Australia is consistently above other countries
all year
. Meanwhile, China
illustrates tendential below for almost a year
.
To begin
with, in 1996, visitors from Australia did expenditures to New Zealand. Exactly 1,000 people
were involved in the activities. This
value shows obviously an increased period of ten years (until 2006). However
, it shows instability and fluctuation until the end year
.
On the other hand
, the result is different depict in China
. It shows an increase in starting year
, but occur fluctuates from 2004 to 2014. The value shows the smallest comparison with other countries
. China
has the higher expenditure of people
just proximally 500 people
(in 2004) and the lowest around 10 people
(1996). However
, this
result illustrates an increase until the end year
(2014).
Tu sumps up, from five countries
, it shows inconsistently amount expenditure of people
in Newzealand. Furthermore
, Australia and China
still exist on the highest and smallest almost every year
.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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