Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some individuals claim that public exhibitions and

art

galleries

will not be

reuqired

Correct your spelling

required

due to

people

can watch historical

objects

and

works

of

art

by utilizing a

computer

and the

Internet

. I totally agree with

this

statement.

To begin

, there are several reasons why I believe public

museums

and

art

galleries

will not be needed.

Firstly

, the

internet

and

computer

provide

free

Correct article usage

a free

show examples

experience for

people

to see historical

objects

and

works

of

art

.

In contrast

,

museums

and

art

galleries

impose fees for

enterance

Correct your spelling

entrance

.

Therefore

,

internet

Correct article usage

the internet

show examples

and

computer

can encourage more

people

to learn about cultures and heritage result of

provide

Change the verb form

providing

show examples

this

experience for free.

Secondly

, public

museums

and

art

galleries

cost a

consderiable

Correct your spelling

considerable

amount of money.

This

is because run

museums

and

art

galleries

require maintenance and pay salaries of staff. In

comparison

Add a comma

,comparison

show examples

if the historical

objects

and

works

only provide via

Correct article usage

the internet

show examples

internet

Capitalize word

Internet

show examples

and

computer

these cost

Change the determiner

this cost

these costs

show examples

will reduce, which mean the government funding will minimize.

Finally

,

persent

Correct your spelling

present

historical

objects

and

works

of

art

by using a

computer

and the

Internet

is

environmentally-friendly

Add an article

the environmentally-friendly

an environmentally-friendly

show examples

way. To illustrate,

people

do not need to travel oversea in order to see historical

objects

and

works

of

art

, which

mean

Correct subject-verb agreement

means

show examples

less

Change the quantifier

fewer

show examples

flights.

As a result

,

less

Change the quantifier

fewer

show examples

flights mean less Co2 footprint, which

this

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

can contribute to

mitigate

Change the verb form

mitigating

show examples

climate change and global warming.

To sum up

, I strongly believe public

museums

and

art

galleries

will not be needed because we can see historical

objects

and

works

of

art

by using a

computer

and the

Internet

.

In addition

,

see

Wrong verb form

seeing

show examples

historical

objects

and

works

of

art

by using a

computer

and the

Internet

can bring many benefits including,

free

Add a missing verb

being free

show examples

or affordable ,

reduce

Wrong verb form

reducing

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

government funding for

museums

and

art

galleries

, eco-friendly.