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Some people believe that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #boys #girls #schools #benefit
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whether both genders should access education in
single
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gender
schools
 or they should be attending co-educational institutions, as it offers enormous advantages. Both sides of
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along with
 my opinion before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. To commence with
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former group view,
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separate schooling system offers
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a distraction
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distraction free
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 environment , because there is less room for early relationships or interactions with
opposite
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the opposite
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 sex. It is generally believed that constant contact with
other
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gender
 can divert them from their focus, specifically when they reach puberty.
Thus
, girls-only or
boys -only
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 education criteria generally
takes
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 a lead in academics.
For instance
,
according to
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the
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 survey conducted by the
times
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 of India demonstrated that individuals
attended
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single
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single-gender
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gender
schools
 performed well as compared to those who followed
trend
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the trend
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 of attending mixed
schools
.
Conversely
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 those who are in
the
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favor
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 of
integrated
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 schooling system believe that children
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attends
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co-education
are
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 more respectful towards
opposite
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the opposite
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gender
, because of the fact that they are more aware
about
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 their
behaviors
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 and sentiments, which is why they show more cooperation and understandability towards each other. To illustrate
this
 more, despite the fact that
first world
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 countries
as
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United
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states
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 of America ,
UK
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 and many more promotes more mixed-
gender
schools
,
but
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the rape and sexual assault rate is less as compared to the nations
follow
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conservative
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 culture and do not prefer to send their children to co-education. I opine that
mixed
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 schooling system is more beneficial because it teaches many other important aspects of life
such
 as decency, respect, love and unity
along with
 education, which
help
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 one in becoming a better individual. In light of the aforementioned, the aim of both types of educational institutions is
same
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.
However
, it depends on the choice of parents where they want to send their child.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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