The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
The line graph given presents
datas
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data
about how
average
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the average
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prices
of
copper
, nickel and zinc changed in 2014. From the overview,
prices
of these three metals all hit their bottom in June. The
prices
remained at
same
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the same
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level during the period from July to September. Changes in
prices
of
copper
and zinc were
similer
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similar
throughout the whole year.
To begin
with, we can see a dramatic decrease in
nickel's
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price
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prices
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in the first six months of 2014, from 6% in January to -3% in June. In July, its
price
went up by -1%, but
then
it did not change until September.
Price's
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change of nickel increased by 1% in the
last
month of 2014. In January,
price
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the price
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of
copper
raised by 2%;
however
, it dropped
stablely
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stable
until June. In December,
copper
's
price
went up by roughly 1.5%, which was very close to its initial number. As for zinc, the
price
soared by 3% in February, but it went down significantly for the next four months.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words prices, copper, price with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 3 times.
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