The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.

The charts below show the distribution of world water and the use of water in three countries.
The first diagram illustrates the distribution of global
water
,
while
the bar chart represents the
use
of
water
in three different countries (Egypt, Saudi, and Canada) in three different sectors (
agriculture
domestic, and
industry
)
Overall
, the source of all
water
is salt
water
, and the main source of freshwater is ice & glaciers. Canada mainly uses
water
for
industry
,
whereas
Saudi and Egypt
use
water
mainly for
agriculture
. The first pie chart shows that 97% of the
water
in the world is saltwater compare to 3% of freshwater. In the second pie chart, it can be noted that
water
from ice and glaciers is about 79% of
freshwaterwater
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freshwater water
fresh water water
compared to groundwater and surface
water
(20% and 1% respectively). In terms of the
use
of
water
, Canada uses most of its
water
in
industry
which is almost 80% compared to
agriculture
and domestic. Both Egypt and Saudi Arabia
use
water
most of their
water
in
agriculture
compared to domestic and
industry
which was about 15 and 10% respectively.
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