Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion

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The effect of human activities on forests and
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nowadays, but there is still no consensus upon what can be done or
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there is anything
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the
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considered
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in our days. We hear about many regulations and laws protecting
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those laws are still to be proven effective. A good example in our case is the posted
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images of the territories on
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showing how they
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30 years, and especially the
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ten years after the
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, where there is
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or the opposite in our case. The
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the field for creative construction, like carbon-neutral cities that are being built, and
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houses that blend perfectly with
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nature. In my opinion the alerts that are being sent through environmental organizations are the cautious basis upon which all the shy and new trials, to protect the environment, are built.
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there is something to be done, or is being currently done, but it's not enough and it's better
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safe than sorry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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