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Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is a positive trend while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays,many scientists
computer
intelligence
also
 known as artificial
intelligence
 is developing at a very fast rate so opinions are divided on some
people
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 that it is a positive trend.
besides
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 that,other
people
 think that when
computer
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computers
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 become more intelligent than human beings is a negative
development
.
although
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 it
is bring
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 many good improvements to society,it is a fundamentally gloomy
development
. Admittedly,there are many advantages
when
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computer
intelligence
developing
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 brings.
one
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 of the most crucial
thing
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 is automation which refers to using
machine
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a machine
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 to do more
human’s
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 work and control operations without human intervention so it
help
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 companies save
times
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time
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 and human resources.
on
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 the opposite side ,it consumes a lot of electricity and money but it
give
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 higher productivity and
bring
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brings
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 more profit.
besides
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 that,it supports human in creating
a
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dense information networks like CHAT GPT which is
a
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 artificial
intelligence
 is
combined
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combines
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 knowledge from different websites and
it
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apply
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answer any question which human ask if it has enough knowledge.
On the other hand
,it will be a negative trend if
human
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humans
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 do not control the
development
 of artificial
intelligence
,which
makes
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 a lot of problems.
the
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 first
problems
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problem
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 is that when
people
 depend too much on
computer
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computers
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,they will be lazy and passive because all
work
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the work
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 is done by computers,robots and
human
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humans
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 can
lost
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 creativity when
robot
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robots
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 help them think.
besides
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 that,when
computer
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a computer
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 or robot has many errors that
people
 cannot detect in time and will affect product quality or have to
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stop
spop
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split
production
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 line . In conclusion,
although
 the
development
 of
computer
intelligence
 has many advantages
such
 as
save
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 time and resources for many companies and
atomation
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automation
, I believe that if artificial
intelligence
 is smarter than human beings,it will bring more problems than
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.
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