The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The Pie Chart and the Table are representing information about
tourists
in a certain holiday resort in Australia. They are shown several points Use synonyms
such
as tourist origin place, average length of stay, most popular accommodation and their main activity during vacation.
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Overall
, Asia was the region which had the most Linking Words
visitors
to come Use synonyms
to
Australia Change preposition
apply
while
the smallest number of people to visit Linking Words
this
place was Other which may consist of various places around the globe.
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To begin
with, European Linking Words
tourists
spent the longest stay with approximately 16 days, followed by American Use synonyms
Tourists
with 14 days, Use synonyms
then
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Tourists
from other countries and Asia respectively with 10 and 7 days. Use synonyms
Next,
the favourite accommodation in Australia for European Linking Words
visitors
and from other regions was either Camping or Caravan whilst Asian Use synonyms
Tourists
choose Use synonyms
a
fancier Correct article usage
apply
places
to stay Correct the article-noun agreement
place
such
as a 5-star hotel, Linking Words
meanwhile
American guests prefer a 4-star hotel. Add a comma
,meanwhile
Lastly
, Asian and American Linking Words
visitors
most likely spent their vacation by doing sightseeing, Use synonyms
while
European people are more likely to choose Swimming or Sunbathing, Linking Words
while
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visitors
from outside those regions prefer to go Surfing.Use synonyms
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