Some people believe that unpaid community services should be the compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, high

schools

are considering

community

services to be the mandatory part of

a

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degree

programmer

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for

students

.

Therefore

,

this

phenomenon could be beneficial for

students

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development and mainly for

schools

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reputation

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. For that

reason

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o would have to agree with

this

prospect.

To begin

with,

this

approach will not only reestablish the whole infrastructure in

atmosphere

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but

also

students

could

also

gain extra

score

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from

this

.

However

, many universities and

schools

in the United States are heavily organised into

community

work

. Which would

also

affect

global

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ranking of total universities by their

work

for

community

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.

In addition

, whether it’s about donating resources to needy people or solving environmental causes by planting trees.

For example

, individuals in

team

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with

highest

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hours in

community

work

should be awarded

with

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extra

grade

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for

this

consideration.

On the other hand

, I believe that every

schools

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should encourage their

students

to take

a

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part in public events to assist everyone.

For instance

,

school

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schools

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could introduce similar

programmers

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which directly help and encourage several others to do these works.

As a result

,

this

compulsory part could

turned

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out to be

phenomena

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for people who actually need help.

Due to

this

,

schools

and

students

have to understand

this

vital approach

of

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this

sensation.

To sum up

,

this

development in

persona

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of

an

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every single

schools

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in

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crucial to be mandatory, it seems to me that

community

work

are

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simple and effective for our own good, which will indirectly

going

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to help us, so it should be essential.