Some people believe that unpaid community services should be the compulsory part of high school programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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schools

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are considering

community

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services to be the mandatory part of

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degree

programmer

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for

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.

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,

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phenomenon could be beneficial for

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students

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development and mainly for

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schools

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reputation

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. For that

reason

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o would have to agree with

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prospect.

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with,

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approach will not only reestablish the whole infrastructure in

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but

also

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students

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could

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gain extra

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from

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.

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, many universities and

schools

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in the United States are heavily organised into

community

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work

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. Which would

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affect

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ranking of total universities by their

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for

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community

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the community

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.

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, whether it’s about donating resources to needy people or solving environmental causes by planting trees.

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, individuals in

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with

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hours in

community

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work

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should be awarded

with

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extra

grade

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for

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consideration.

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, I believe that every

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schools

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should encourage their

students

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to take

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part in public events to assist everyone.

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,

school

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could introduce similar

programmers

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which directly help and encourage several others to do these works.

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,

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compulsory part could

turned

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out to be

phenomena

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for people who actually need help.

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,

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and

students

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have to understand

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vital approach

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sensation.

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,

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development in

persona

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of

an

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every single

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schools

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in

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crucial to be mandatory, it seems to me that

community

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work

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are

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simple and effective for our own good, which will indirectly

going

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to help us, so it should be essential.