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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.
The pie chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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 what kind of animal
used
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is used
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 for testing in the United States.
Overall
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,
while
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according to
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 the figures rabbits
most
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are most
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 popular for scientists, on the other ,hand sheep
out
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 of
favor
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favour
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 for
scientits
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scientists
.most unpopular for
testings
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testing
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.
It is clear that
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largest
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the largest
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 proportion
tipe
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type
tipi
 of
testings
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tests
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 for scientists
are
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is
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sheeps
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sheep
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 (38%). By applying contrast hamsters are the second kind of
annimals
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animals
 the are accounting
27.7
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for 27.7
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%. In ,addition virtually primates are unpopular for
testings
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testing
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 it took 9% of the pie chart. Just near
of
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the percentage the pigs it
tooks
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took
 9.3% and more
prefer
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then
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than
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 pigs are the dogs it higher
of
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the percentage of 1.1%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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