The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and2001. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie graph shows the
difference
changes Replace the word
different
in
Change preposition
apply
annual
by particular UK school in 1981, 1991 ad 2001. The 5 school spending are insurance, other Change the word
annually
workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
salaries
, resources eg books, fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
equipment
and teachers
Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
salary
. I would like to write Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
the
difference in the following graphs.
As can be seen, Change preposition
about the
the
total spending Change preposition
in the
1981
in Change preposition
in 1981
UK
, most of it went to Correct article usage
the UK
teachers
salary what is 40%, and 30% went for resources E.G books and Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
equipment
. After ten years it happened a few changes of
spending 50% goes to Change preposition
in
teachers
Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
salaries
. In addition
, the other 50% went for the
insurance, resources books, Correct article usage
apply
fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
equipment
and other workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
salaries
. Moreover
, in 2001 the teachers
Change to a genitive case
teacher's
teachers'
salaries
just decrease 5%. And the fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
future
equipment
increases
up to 23%. Change the verb form
increase
However
, the other main features it didn't make big changes during that ten years ago.
Overall
, there were differences of
expenditure proportion between 1981 and 2001. Change preposition
in
However
, the salaries
were the largest cost to the school of all time.Submitted by hamoudisayyah on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, fumiture, equipment, teachers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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