The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and2001. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie graph shows the
difference
changes Replace the word
different
in
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apply
annual
by particular UK school in 1981, 1991 ad 2001. The 5 school spending are insurance, other Change the word
annually
workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
salaries
, resources eg books, Use synonyms
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fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
equipment
and Use synonyms
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teachers
Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
salary
. I would like to write Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
the
difference in the following graphs.
As can be seen, Change preposition
about the
the
total spending Change preposition
in the
1981
in Change preposition
in 1981
UK
, most of it went to Correct article usage
the UK
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teachers
salary what is 40%, and 30% went for resources E.G books and Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
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fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
equipment
. After ten years it happened a few changes Use synonyms
of
spending 50% goes to Change preposition
in
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teachers
Change noun form
teachers'
teacher's
salaries
. Use synonyms
In addition
, the other 50% went for Linking Words
the
insurance, resources books, Correct article usage
apply
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fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
equipment
and other Use synonyms
workers
Change noun form
workers'
worker's
salaries
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, in 2001 the Linking Words
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teachers
Change to a genitive case
teacher's
teachers'
salaries
just decrease 5%. And the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
fumiture
and Correct your spelling
furniture
future
equipment
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increases
up to 23%. Change the verb form
increase
However
, the other main features it didn't make big changes during that ten years ago.
Linking Words
Overall
, there were differences Linking Words
of
expenditure proportion between 1981 and 2001. Change preposition
in
However
, the Linking Words
salaries
were the largest cost to the school of all time.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, fumiture, equipment, teachers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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