The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and2001. Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular

UK school in 1981, 1991 and2001.

Summarise the information by selecting andreporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie graph shows the
difference
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changes
in
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annual
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by particular UK school in 1981, 1991 ad 2001. The 5 school spending are insurance, other
workers
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workers'
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salaries
, resources eg books,
fumiture
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furniture
and
equipment
and
teachers
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teachers'
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salary
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salaries
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. I would like to write
the
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difference in the following graphs.   As can be seen,
the
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total spending
1981
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in
UK
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the UK
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, most of it went to
teachers
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salary what is 40%, and 30% went for resources E.G books and
fumiture
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furniture
and
equipment
. After ten years it happened a few changes
of
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spending 50% goes to
teachers
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salaries
.
In addition
, the other 50% went for
the
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insurance, resources books,
fumiture
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furniture
and
equipment
and other
workers
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workers'
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salaries
.
Moreover
, in 2001 the
teachers
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teacher's
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salaries
just decrease 5%. And the
fumiture
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furniture
future
and
equipment
increases
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up to 23%.
However
, the other main features it didn't make big changes during that ten years ago.   
Overall
, there were differences
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expenditure proportion between 1981 and 2001.
However
, the
salaries
were the largest cost to the school of all time.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words salaries, fumiture, equipment, teachers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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