The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The two supplied pie charts outline the trend of results of a survey which sampled a
cross section
of 100 people from 1994 to 1998. And the destinations of visits abroad by UK residents to Add a hyphen
cross-section
western
Europe, North America, and other areas. Capitalize word
Western
However
, there are four reasons for visiting abroad which are, Holiday, Business, visits friends
or relatives, and other reasons.
The total Change preposition
to friends
visits
abroad by Correct quantifier usage
number of visits
the
UK Residents in 1994 is 22,072. Approximately 18,000 residents went to Western Europe, that’s a very large proportion, and the 4,072 Correct article usage
apply
resident’s
half of them went to North America, another half went to other areas. In Change noun form
residents
year
1995, the total abroad Change the article
the year
travelers
are 21,610, which is the lowest of Change the spelling
travellers
travelers
out of the country Change the spelling
travellers
while
,
the highest Remove the comma
apply
total
abroad is 28,828 in 1998. Correct quantifier usage
number of total
In addition
, most travelers
travel for holidays, and Change the spelling
travellers
a
very small proportion Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Change preposition
of travelers
travelers
travel for other reasons.
Change the spelling
travellers
Overall
, Western Europe hosted most of the travelers
from the UK in all years 1994 to 1998 with almost 85% of Change the spelling
travellers
total
people. Correct article usage
the total
Instead
, North America and other areas hosted the last
15% of People.Submitted by hamoudisayyah on
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