The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The
demonstrate
is a line graph detailing Replace the word
demonstration
figure
Fix the agreement mistake
figures
of
the money Change preposition
for
was
spent on books from 1995 to 2005 in four Unnecessary verb
apply
countries
Germany
, France, Italy and Austria.
Overall
, the figure for four
Correct article usage
the four
countries
saw similar changes, increasing in the latter year. The highest expenditure on books is Germany
with 80 million
US dollars
whereas
the lowest is Austria, this
country still had 30 million
US dollars
.
Looking at Germany
, the proportion of Germany
started at 80 million
US dollars
, after which it experienced a fluctuation between 90 million
US dollars
and nearly 85 million
US dollars
from 1999 to 2003, before ending the period at approximate
95 Change the word
approximately
million
US dollars
. Austria had by far the largest number of Germany
with exactly 30 million
US dollars
. This
number then
significant rise to 40 million
US dollars
and 60 million
US dollars
between 1999 and 2003, final
at rise to 70 Change the word
finally
million
US dollars
.
The figure of two countries
France and Italy. Conversely
, the amount of money in both countries
had similar changes, slight
growing to Change the word
slightly
a
highest point of Change the article
the
two
Correct article usage
the two
countries
in the latter year of the decade with nearly 75 million
US dollars
and about 53 million
US dollars
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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, germany, million, dollars with synonyms.
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