The diagram shows how tea processed. 150 words.

The diagram shows how tea processed. 150 words.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram shows how tea processed. 150 words.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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making a
cup
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of
tea
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can be be divided into two clear sets of
stages
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: those in the
kettle
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and those in the
cup
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. The process requires relatively little specialised equipment and takes around 10
minutes
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to complete.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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making a
cup
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of
tea
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can be divided into two clear sets of
stages
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: those in the
kettle
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and those in the
cup
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. The process requires relatively little specialised equipment and takes around 10
minutes
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to complete. The initial
stages
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of making a
cup
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of
tea
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all involve the
kettle
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. In the first stage, a
kettle
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is filled with water from a tap. After the
kettle
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has been plugged in, it boils after 5
minutes
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. The
stages
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that require a
cup
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now begin.
While
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the
kettle
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is boiling, a teabag is placed into a
cup
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. Hot water is
then
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added to the
cup
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. Before removing the teabag, the
tea
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should be left for 5
minutes
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.
Finally
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, having added either sugar or milk, you can drink the
tea
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "it is clear that, overall".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cup, tea, stages, kettle, minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "divided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "sets" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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