Recently you bought a kitchen appliance from a brand shop. it did not work properly within the first two days of its purchase. the shop took it back and said they would repair it within two days.you have waited two weeks, and still, it is not ready. write a letter to the shop to complain about. it in your letter - explain what has happened - mention how you feel about it - ask them to repair the kitchen appliance sooner supply you with a new one right at is 150 words. you do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Yony and I am one of your regular customers. I writing
this
letter regarding my dissatisfaction about my repair appliance of the
oven
has not come until today.
Firstly
, my green colour
oven
with white strokes on both sides had been requested a reparation. Within 2 days of using
this
oven
, it could not heat properly.
Secondly
, your shop said if any problem occurs, I called your customer service staff to solve
this
matter. During the conversation, your staff, Juni said that the
oven
must return to the shop for additional repairs within 2 days.
In contrast
, I have been waiting
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repaired
oven
for 2 weeks and nothing progress informed. Because of
this
issue, I felt upset about your
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services.
Moreover
, the
oven
I bought is used to help me
roasting
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the food for my family gathering. Unfortunately, I had done the food using my neighbour's
oven
,
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my neighbour did not use. I would greatly
appreaciate
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appreciate
you to resolve
this
problem promptly. I kindly ask your help to send a new
oven
because of
this
matter. Please ensure that
such
an issue won't happen again in the future. Yours faithfully, Yony
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