You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart shows the proportion of care
time
given to young ones at dawn by the parents of a certain country in the year 2022.
Overall
, it was seen that care given by the mother has a high trend, followed by that which was rendered by both parents together. While
that of the father has relatively low trends.
From the chart, mothers spent more time
with kids in various ways. For the
dressing, a rate above 70% Correct article usage
apply
time
spent daily in the evening, followed by a sharp decrease of 50% being spent on homework and experiencing a sudden fall in the time
rate of about 30% spending on playing games, ,
Change the punctuation
apply
however
an increase of above 40% of her daily hours was used for preparing the kids for bed. ,Add the comma(s)
,however
Moreover
the trend of both parents together has a different mission as it was presented that a proportion of above 20% of total hours per day was used for dressing, next is a slight increase to about 40% on homework, Add a comma
,Moreover
then
a sharp rise to 70% of time
spent on playing games which are at its peak but preparing the young ones for bed experienced a reduction of time
to 50% by both guidance together.
Furthermore
, as presented by the chart, the father used up limited hours in all activities. From dressing which has about 2% to a sudden rise to 10% of time
spent on homework then
had a sharp decrease to half of about 5% on playing games and preparing for bed respectively.Submitted by zikahill48 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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