The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The given map clearly illustrates the two noticeable places for building a new college in Canterbury.
Overall
, the given two territories have different facilities during the school period. one of them is located in an urban area whereas
the other is in a rural area.
The first possibility is located in the countryside and this
territory is near the main roads which are 5 km from the city centre and Sturry which has a 7.000 population. Moreover
, next to the first acceptable area for a school is a housing place. Additionally
, the first location is nearer the university than the second one.
As can be seen, the second proper location for constructing the college is surrounded by the housing, also
it is in
downtown Change preposition
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However
, the town centre has no traffic congestion. Furthermore
, from this
place to Chartham is 7 km and 4500 people settle down in Chartham. The university is on the north side of the second logical alternative.Submitted by gficnm
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