The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate what a village named Ryemouth looked like in the year 1995 and its current layout after the developments.
It is clear that
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there are various striking transformations with the appearance of more housing, a car park
as well as
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the replacement of some other facilities. As can be seen, one particular change is that there are more housing and a road is opened in the area in order to facilitate the increasing number of residents.
Moreover
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, the northeastern farm is converted into a golf yard and the forest park is removed,
instead
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, 2 tennis courts appear. Another significant modernization is that the fishing port on the seaside to the south of the village is now demolished.
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, the fish market and shops in the southwest are turned into apartments and restaurants respectively.
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, the café
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the hotel remains the same place, and a parking place is currently built right next to the hotel.
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