You recently completed a course and you borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn’t return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book was it? How helpful was the book? Explain why you couldn’t return it in time.

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Dear Johnson, I am writing

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letter in regard to the book which I have taken for a week to complete the course and didn't return to you on time and will be explaining why there is a delay. The book was about Object-oriented programming written by Arthuro Romario named, OOP-345, as it was needed for the course to be completed. It really helped me to differentiate between object and class which I was finding really tough

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being my mentor

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you are away. To add up, I have learned about data structures and algorithms which helped me in my exam very well. I would like to put up a valid reason for not returning it in the given time frame as I was really sick these days

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, I was unable to attend the school for which I have provided a medical note. Take my sincere apologies and forgive my mistake

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time. Thank you for understanding. Yours Sincerely, Yeamin

yeahyeaminFri Jul 28 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

164 words

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