Some people think that the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym, while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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fit.
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it is widely believed that the best
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to stay fit is by joining a
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, others believe doing everyday
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as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient.In my
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there is a lot of lesson in
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for keeping fit for everyone On the one hand, it is argued that
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to stay fit is
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a
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. The main reason there are many tools and items for training. It is possible to say that every
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is special to stay fit for everyone.
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you spent money to join
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and you can
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, it is strongly believed by others that doing everyday
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as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. People often have
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opinion because it don't waste money for going
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many
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they can stay fit
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and eating healthy foods. A particularly good example here is some people want to keep money and everyday
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are the best
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to stay fit with them and it can bring many positive
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for them In conclusion about
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to stay fit we have two
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joining a
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and doing everyday
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at home there are several
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for
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to keep fit. Personally,
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that joining a
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is the best
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to stay fit because in
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they will introduce many
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for keeping fit and
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trainer will teach you
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Structured workouts
  • Professional guidance
  • Variety of equipment
  • Tailored fitness programs
  • Motivation
  • Convenient
  • Cost-effective
  • Natural integration
  • Comprehensive workout
  • Measure progress
  • Self-motivation
  • Sustainable
  • Fitness habits
  • General well-being
  • Psychological benefits
  • Intimidation
  • Time commitment
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