The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

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which

bricks

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are manufactured for the building industry. The process describes seven main steps,beginning with the digger of

clay

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then

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concluding with the delivery packaging.

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,

clay

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is extracted from the ground using a digger.

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clay

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is added on a metal grid and

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it is broken down and filtered by a roller. Following that,sand and water are added to the

clay

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.

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cut the wire cutter and add there

clay

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in order to

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into moulds. In the next step,when the

bricks

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are formed,they are left to dry in a drying oven for 24-48 hours.After drying,the

bricks

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pass a heating process in

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.

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,they are heated at

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ranging from 200 C to 980 C.

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by a period in a

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kiln,where they are heated from 870 C to 1300*C.After being heated,the

bricks

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are placed in

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the cooling

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chamber for 48-72 hours.

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are packaged and prepared for delivery to different places.