The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
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The process of brick manufacturing includes several key stages.
First,
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clay is dug out from the ground using a digger. The extracted clay is passed through a metal grid to remove large pieces and is
further
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refined using a roller. After that, sand and water are added to the clay to create a smooth mixture.
This
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mixture is
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shaped into
bricks
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in two possible ways: either using molds or
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shaping it by cutting it, depending on the desired shape. Once shaped, the
bricks
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are transferred to a drying oven, where they are dried for 24 to 48 hours. After the drying process, the
bricks
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are heated in kilns at two temperature stages: moderate heat (200–980°C) and high heat (870–1300°C). The heated
bricks
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are
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moved to a cooling chamber, where they are cooled for 48 to 72 hours.
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, the cooled
bricks
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are packaged and transported for delivery to construction sites.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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