In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this do you think? Is it a positive or negative development?

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Today businesses are
extremely
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common kind of activity
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most businessmen do their best for clients
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them. They use
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blatant
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of making their product popular - saying that
products
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are new which, from my point of view, is
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appropriate
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 of advertising.
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of people consider that new
products
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have higher quality than the old ones. thereby
products
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which are new in some
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are, mostly in preference.
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, businesses have an opportunity to leverage
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this
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belief and increase their income.
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, in 2020, when Kylie Cosmetics experience a decline in purchases, staff started adding new useful components
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their
products
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,
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and started
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creating new lines of decorative cosmetics in order to attract more clients. Mentioning new things about a product in advertisements should not be counted as a negative improvement. Because there is not something bad in informing people about
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products
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development if it is genuinely
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becoming
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newer.
Also
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,
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advertising
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really convenient for content-maker, for people who
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for
good's
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popularity. They do not have to wonder a lot about how
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product
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a product
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famous
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but can write about new elements in it, definitely. If they
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exist
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in fact.
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, businesses can attract more purchases and gain more money in a
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which does not
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do
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any harm
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to
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clients.
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profitable and useful for either
business
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businesses
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 or buyers. In conclusion,
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kind of
advertisments
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advertisement
are
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very popular and it is explainable. It,
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, cannot be considered
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apply
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a negative development as no one suffers from it, no one complains and it is normal in society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Emphasize
  • Novel(ty)
  • Consumer interest
  • Competitive advantage
  • Research and development (R&D)
  • Technological advancements
  • Innovation
  • Saturated market
  • Gimmick
  • Consumer disappointment
  • Brand trust
  • Expenditure
  • Sustainability
  • Upgrade
  • Waste
  • Long-term value
  • Engagement
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