In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this do you think? Is it a positive or negative development?
Today businesses are
extremely
common kind of activity Correct article usage
an extremely
therefore
most businessmen do their best for clients choose
them. They use Fix the infinitive
to choose
the
blatant Correct article usage
a
way
of making their product popular - saying that products
are new which, from my point of view, is quite
appropriate Change the article
quite an
a quite
way
of advertising.
Majority
of people consider that new Correct article usage
The majority
products
have higher quality than the old ones. thereby products
which are new in some way
are, mostly in preference. Hence
, businesses have an opportunity to leverage with
Change preposition
apply
this
belief and increase their income. For example
, in 2020, when Kylie Cosmetics experience a decline in purchases, staff started adding new useful components in
their Change preposition
to
products
, started
creating new lines of decorative cosmetics in order to attract more clients.
Mentioning new things about a product in advertisements should not be counted as a negative improvement. Because there is not something bad in informing people about Correct word choice
and started
products
development if it is genuinely Change the noun form
product
become
newer. Wrong verb form
becoming
Also
, such
advertising are
really convenient for content-maker, for people who Change the verb form
is
responsible
for Add a missing verb
are responsible
good's
popularity. They do not have to wonder a lot about how Change noun form
good
make
Add the particle
to make
product
famousAdd an article
a product
,
but can write about new elements in it, definitely. If they Remove the comma
apply
exit
in fact. Correct your spelling
exist
Furthermore
, businesses can attract more purchases and gain more money in a way
which does not to
any harm Correct your spelling
do
for
clients. Change preposition
to
That is
profitable and useful for either business
or buyers.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
businesses
this
kind of advertisments
Correct your spelling
advertisement
are
very popular and it is explainable. It, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
also
, cannot be considered as
a negative development as no one suffers from it, no one complains and it is normal in society.Change preposition
apply
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