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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture illustrates the changes in the appearance of a conference
centre
 between 2010 and 2015. In general, it can be apparently seen that the
centre
 had a few innovative modifications. It was modernized with new
rooms
 and construction.
Besides
 that, some
rooms
 and construction were not adjusted.
Initially
,the
centre
 had seven places including
two
rooms
, a reception area, a carpark, a
hall
, and
two
 gardens. In 2025,
two
rooms
 on the right corner will experience no change. But
besides
 that, the
hall
 and the reception will shrink a little bit.
Then
, a new residence
hall
 with 20
rooms
 will
also
 be constructed, being next to the
hall
.
Hence
, the car park will be moved to the left side and its area will be enlarged. The garden will
also
 have a modification.
Two
 old gardens will be collated and growing up in a width. In the front of
this
 garden, multiple new facilities will be added
such
 as an IT
centre
, a canteen and kitchen,
two
 meeting
rooms
, a game room and a music room.
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