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The picture below shows the difference in the layout of the conference centre in 2010 and 2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture illustrates the changes in the appearance of a conference
centre
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 between 2010 and 2015. In general, it can be apparently seen that the
centre
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 had a few innovative modifications. It was modernized with new
rooms
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 and construction.
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 that, some
rooms
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 and construction were not adjusted.
Initially
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,the
centre
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 had seven places including
two
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rooms
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, a reception area, a carpark, a
hall
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, and
two
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 gardens. In 2025,
two
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rooms
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 on the right corner will experience no change. But
besides
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 that, the
hall
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 and the reception will shrink a little bit.
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, a new residence
hall
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 with 20
rooms
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 will
also
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 be constructed, being next to the
hall
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.
Hence
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, the car park will be moved to the left side and its area will be enlarged. The garden will
also
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 have a modification.
Two
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 old gardens will be collated and growing up in a width. In the front of
this
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 garden, multiple new facilities will be added
such
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 as an IT
centre
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, a canteen and kitchen,
two
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 meeting
rooms
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, a game room and a music room.
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