The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The images presented indicate the details of travellers in a particular recreational facility in Australia.
It is best described that
European
and Asian
tourists
ranked high with their choice of accommodation. European
and American
tourists
on the other hand
chose to sleep under the moon.
Overall
, based on its highest percentile report, Asian
tourists
accommodated most of the facilities in Australia at 37%, European
sightseers ranked second at 35%, and American
visitors and other nationalities came in third and last
respectively. The column chart ,on the other hand
, indicated that European
tourists
stayed longer in their holiday Inn compared to Asian
tourists
that spent only a week. Amongst the popular tourist destinations, Asian
and American
tourists
preferred to stay in Hotels, while
European
and American
tourists
chose to stay outdoors. Outdoor activities such
as sightseeing, swimming, and sunbathing were the most popular tourists
.Submitted by carmelamaitim on
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