The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The images presented indicate the details of travellers in a particular recreational facility in Australia.
It is best described that
European
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Asian
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tourists
ranked high with their choice of accommodation. Use synonyms
European
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American
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tourists
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on the other hand
chose to sleep under the moon.
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, based on its highest percentile report, Linking Words
Asian
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tourists
accommodated most of the facilities in Australia at 37%, Use synonyms
European
sightseers ranked second at 35%, and Use synonyms
American
visitors and other nationalities came in third and Use synonyms
last
respectively. The column chart ,Linking Words
on the other hand
, indicated that Linking Words
European
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tourists
stayed longer in their holiday Inn compared to Use synonyms
Asian
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tourists
that spent only a week. Amongst the popular tourist destinations, Use synonyms
Asian
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American
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tourists
preferred to stay in Hotels, Use synonyms
while
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European
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American
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tourists
chose to stay outdoors. Outdoor activities Use synonyms
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tourists
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