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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

#students #science #subjects #university #countries #effects #society
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One of the heated issues is there are
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students
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 following
science
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-related
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 in university. Many people think that
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 situation cannot
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 any negative effects.
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, I do believe that the lack of
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 severe consequences
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 society. In
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students
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. There is no doubt that the number of
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 choosing
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 has decreased dramatically in recent years. There are many reasons for
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. For one thing, many undergraduates found
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 difficult and not attractive enough. For another,
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subjects
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 taught in the current educational program are so impractical that undergraduates cannot apply what they learn in
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 situations. The most familiar example of
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 have to learn a lot of unrealistic knowledge that cannot help them much in their work.
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, many
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 having a great passion for
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 may not have enough money to pay because of the high educational fee
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 university. It seems quite clear that these factors have a significant contribution to the decrease
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science
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students
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. It is well known that the shortage of undergraduates learning
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 may
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 extreme effects on society. As many
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 found
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 unattractive,
students
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 can easily get bored of
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. The
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subjects
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 boredom is the main reason for the lack of
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students
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 which can lead to the shortage of
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 workers in the future. Take Vietnam for an example, if
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 situation keeps continuing, Vietnamese patients will have struggled with the decrease in the number of doctors in 50 years’ time. To address
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 problem, the Vietnamese government has worked out many measures to attract more
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 to choose to study
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 at university. In a nutshell,
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 problem must be tackled quickly. In conclusion, the decline in
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students
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 can
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 terrible effects. Both governments and their citizens have to take action to address
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 constructively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deter
  • promotion
  • opportunities
  • role models
  • lucrative
  • employment
  • gender stereotypes
  • societal norms
  • access to information
  • technological stagnation
  • shortage
  • skilled professionals
  • innovation
  • healthcare sector
  • workforce
  • global competitiveness
  • advancements
  • economic growth
  • public health services
  • environmental sciences
  • combat climate change
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