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Some people think that children should start formal education as early as possible, where as other people think children should not start until the age of Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In
this
 competitive world, every
parents
 think better for their
children
. They do every possible thing for them for their bright future and it starts from an early
age
. Some argue that
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children
 should begin their formal studies early as possible,
while
 some oppose it and propose that they should wait till a certain
age
 and I strongly support the former view. In
this
 essay,
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 will discuss both views and
also
 express my own as well. On the one ,hand It is not wrong that
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parents
 should take decisions regarding their studies until they grow to take their own. Nowadays,
parents
 put their
children
 in preschool
instead
 of teaching at their home. They think it is better, they learn it in some kind of school or child care.
Also
, I have seen some cases, where
children
 are enrolled prior to their schooling
age
. The reason behind
this
 might be
parents
 think that, if their child starts schooling at little
age
, he or she can have an advantage over other
children
.
Moreover
, because of hectic lifestyle, guardians simply put their son/daughter in child care or pre-school, so, they do not have to be bothered to teach them essential learnings.
In addition
, in
this
 cut-throat competition, they think by early education they can be successful.
On the other hand
, by putting
children
 in school at an early
age
, they are ruining their childhood. At the time, they should play with their peer and learn new things, they are suffocating their growth. And in the future, it will cause depression. I have seen many
children
, who were put in early schooling and are facing mental trauma or depression because of the burden their
parents
 have put on them. To recapitulate, I would say, there is a proper time for everything. Early education does not guarantee success, but, the time they lost will never come back. So, let them grow at their pace.
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