The graph gives information about the consumption of fast food (in grams per week), in the UK from 1970 to 1990.
This
graph looks at the volume of fast food
consumption from 1970 to 1990. Tree category
of junk Fix the agreement mistake
categories
food
are presented here.
Firstly
, the upward trend can be seen for hamburgers and fish and chips samples during the 20 years
. Whereas
the mass of pizza consumpts
per week decreases in the first fifteen Correct your spelling
consumption
years
, and then
slightly increases from the
1985 to 1990.
The presented graph Change the article
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indicate
the contrast Correct subject-verb agreement
indicates
of
the consumption Change preposition
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junk
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of junk
food
. For example
, the amount of hamburgers becomes more than sixth as many in twenty years
. Furthemore
, Correct your spelling
Furthermore
the
similar picture can be observed for the fish and Correct article usage
a
ships
category, Correct your spelling
chips
this
sample rose more than on
five times. Change preposition
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Above all
, this
type is much more popular in 1990 compared to others - the consuption
is about 500 grams per week.
To summarize, the average amount of fast Correct your spelling
consumption
food
has risen through all these years
. In addition
, the most unpopular type of food
in 1990 is pizza, but in the
1970 it has Change the article
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others.Submitted by li_istomina on
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