The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The four circle charts provide data about
units
of electricity manufacturing by fuel source in different countries Use synonyms
such
as Australia and France from 1980 to 2000. Linking Words
Overall
, the usage of coal was prevalent among Australian people, Linking Words
while
nuclear power became the main source of electricity in France throughout the given time.
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According to
the first two charts which describe Linking Words
units
of energy by various fuel in Australia, in 1980 the production of natural gas and hydropower (20 Use synonyms
units
) were equal 1980. Use synonyms
However
, after 20 years, producing coal was placed as a source of energy: oil and natural gas. It is interesting to note that the total production of hydropower increased from 20 to 36 Linking Words
units
.
Referring to the remaining pie charts which illustrate the amount of France's energy sources, about 15 Use synonyms
units
of nuclear power were produced in 1980, but after two decades Use synonyms
this
sort of power replaced other sources of fuel Linking Words
such
as natural gas and hydropower. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, the Linking Words
units
of coal remained in the same quantity in 2000.Use synonyms
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