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Writing Task 1 You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college adminisllator. In your letter • say which part-time course you booked • explain why you need to cancel your booking • ask about booking a different course Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter in regard to the recent booking which I made for attending the part-time
course
 on “Introduction to Cryptocurrency ” in your college.
Due to
 changes in government regulations, I would request you to cancel my booking. With the crackdown on many crypto exchanges, funding has stopped in these companies and job opportunities are at their lowest. My only reason for attending
this
course
 was to start earning.
Hence
, I am afraid that I will have to move on to a different
course
 which has better career opportunities. Recently, I have read a lot about Artificial intelligence and industry experts think that it is the next big thing. I feel learning about
this
 technology would be a better option for me. I would like to know more details about the part-time
course
 on “AI and its future” and register myself for the next available
course
. I am looking forward to your positive response. Thank you! Yours faithfully, Eshaan
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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