The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
The diagram shows
overview
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of an
airport
currently and after its restructuring next year.
Overall
, we observe that in
present
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situation the
airport
only has two entrances, one for departure and the other for arrivals
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, after
development
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there are a total of 4 entrances i.e., 2 for departure and 2 for arrivals. When we compare the pictures of
airport
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the airport
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now and after
it's
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renovation we come across a lot of significant changes
such
as, the present image comprises
of
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4 facilities, that are,
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, Cafe, Walkway and 8
gates
.
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after a year
depiction
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we observe that the previous facilities
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as well as
new facilities are
also
added.
For instance
, Bag drop, ATM, Car hire and
walk way
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has been changed a sky train now.
Furthermore
, one more major variance can be seen
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the
gates
. Now the number of
gates
are
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8 yet
on the other hand
in next year there will be 10 more
gates
added. Plus the
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of
airport
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will
also
be made bigger and more spacious for the travellers.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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