You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move •Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about the moving service I took of your company.
I live in Muzaffarnagar for the last
12 years with my family. Recently, I shifted to Gurgaon due to
my job. However
, all of my belongings were in my hometown. Therefore
, I decided to take service of your company to move things from my place to an apartment in Gurgaon.
Later, I found out some of my books were damaged and a few were missing as well. I called the driver to inquire about it and got to know that he was driving at high speed and applied brakes on a turn due to
which the carton containing books fell out of the vehicle.
I would like to recommend that the company keeps a check on the driving skills as well as
the personality traits of the drivers while
hiring them. Additionally
, charging them with a fine in such
incidents will make them more cautious at work.
Yours faithfully,
Divya MadanSubmitted by cadivyamadan1777 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite