You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move •Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to express my dissatisfaction about the moving service I took of your company. I live in Muzaffarnagar for the

last

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12 years with my family. Recently, I shifted to Gurgaon

due to

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my job.

However

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, all of my belongings were in my hometown.

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, I decided to take service of your company to move things from my place to an apartment in Gurgaon. Later, I found out some of my books were damaged and a few were missing as well. I called the driver to inquire about it and got to know that he was driving at high speed and applied brakes on a turn

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which the carton containing books fell out of the vehicle. I would like to recommend that the company keeps a check on the driving skills

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the personality traits of the drivers

while

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hiring them.

Additionally

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, charging them with a fine in

such

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incidents will make them more cautious at work. Yours faithfully, Divya Madan

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

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in additional
moreover
also
for example
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although
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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