The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of how parents in a country spent time taking care

their children in the evening in 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting

the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate how families took care of their youngsters in the evening in 2020.
Overall
, it can be seen that fathers alone were not involved as much as
mothers
alone or even in the case where their partners
at
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home. Dressing shows an interesting phenomenon as almost three-quarters of
mothers
were involved in
this
task.
In contrast
, around 20% of both parents cooperated
this
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task in 2020. When it comes to gaming both parents were involved with their offspring in 70% of the shown cases which is almost three times more than the proportion done by
mothers
alone. school tasks and bedding regulations showed similar trends as they were done by around 45% of
mothers
alone.
On the other hand
, both parents were involved in these tasks with a proportion just below 40% and near 50% for homework and bed-preparing activities, respectively
Although
fathers alone showed a noticeable lack of interest in child-caring , a maximal percentage of 10% was seen in Homework activities. .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bar chart
  • Percentage
  • Parents
  • Spent time
  • Taking care
  • Children
  • Evening
  • 2022
  • Summarise
  • Information
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Relevant
  • Patterns
  • Trends
  • Highest
  • Lowest
  • Activities
  • Gender
  • Conclusion
  • Findings
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