The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country between 1958 to 2008
Overall
, it can be seen from the pie chart, working adults spent more time working and sleeping.
Furthermore
, working, relaxing at home and travel increased, the opposite was true for the other activities In 1958, working and sleeping take the most figures with 33% and 32%. After 50 years ,people spent more term to work,42%, but sleeping decreased by 7%,25% in total per cent. Employees spent less time travelling to work only with 2% and relaxing at home at 8% in 1958. In 2008, the number of people relaxing at home rise 5%, 13%, and travel to work grow 6%,8% of the total. 50 years later, the percentage of other interests or playing sports went up 2%,
while
that working adults went down significantly by 13% in total
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