The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows Paris Metro station passengers. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents information about the
number
of
passengers
in the Paris Metro station. Conclude the data by choosing and informing the main features. Currently using the service in various types of public transportation, one of which is the subway, which is the transportation that has a large
number
of
people
using the service,
therefore
all data is summarized in the form of a line graph. From the information, the
time
that the
number
of
people
rises sharply and reaches the peak at 8.00-9.00 a.
m
, which has the
number
of
passengers
400
people
because
this
is the
time
that
people
are travelling to work.
As well as
over the
time
12.00 - 2.00 p.
m
, there are the same
number
of
passengers
,which has amount is 300
people
. The
time
with the least
number
of
passengers
is 6.00 a.
m
, 4.00,8.00,10.00 p.
m
.,there are 100
people
because it may be at the
time
of the morning or late at night. From the above line graph, you can see that there is a difference in the
number
of
people
using the subway at different times.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers, people, time, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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