You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move • Describe the damage • Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Manager, I recently moved to Kick Ave. 275 using your company service
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27th
Febuary
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February
2023 From Bueno Aires. 205. The service that u gave us is really good and helpful.
It's take
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much faster rather than other company.
Besides
of
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that, I would like to inform you that I got some
problem
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with
the
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moving. Here is
some
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list that I would like you to review.
First,
my refrigerator is not working and got some scratches
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the lower door. I have attached
with
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this
email that I have taken before moving.
Second,
some of my
stuff
haven't
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moved that's a total of 3 boxes. And that boxes contain all of my working
stuff
.
Thrid
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, my shower
stuff
went missing. There's
a soap
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and my toothbrush.
Lastly
, my backpack zipline got
damage
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and couldn't be
open
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. I think
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would like you to take
responsiblity
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responsibility
by coming here and
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all of my
stuff
.
Also
, I would like a refund like the term and
condition
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that u offer in the agreement. So could you come here today? I need
this
problem to
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as soon as possible. Thank
for
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reading and replying. Best regards, Alexander Hung
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