You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move •Describe the damage •Say what you would like the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Andrew and I used your company's services when I moved. I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with your services. Allow me to explain the details.
Firstly
, I lived on
Orchird
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Orchard
Street with
house
number is 14th and I moved to Sesame Street with 2nd of
house
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number on 1st August at 8 AM. During
this
situation, your company only sent 5 people and 1 box car.
Secondly
, I thought one of your staff, Howey was not strong enough for
this
issue.
Moreover
, his teammates had not really
help
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him when he took my computer desk that has transparent glass on the upper side. After they put everything back in my new
house
, I checked all of my items, my computer desk
have
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some dent because of
this
moved
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. I felt so upset
,
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because
this
desk is one of my favourite items in the
house
. I kindly ask your assistance with my prompt. I would like you to provide some additional training for your member. Please ensure
this
matter will not happen again in the future. Yours faithfully, Andrew
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