You recently moved house and you used a removal Company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company. In your letter, •Give details of the move •Describe the damage •Say what you would like the manager to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Andrew and I used your company's services when I moved. I am writing

this

letter to express my dissatisfaction with your services. Allow me to explain the details.

Firstly

, I lived on

Orchird

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Orchard

Street with

house

number is 14th and I moved to Sesame Street with 2nd of

house

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number on 1st August at 8 AM. During

this

situation, your company only sent 5 people and 1 box car.

Secondly

, I thought one of your staff, Howey was not strong enough for

this

issue.

Moreover

, his teammates had not really

help

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him when he took my computer desk that has transparent glass on the upper side. After they put everything back in my new

house

, I checked all of my items, my computer desk

have

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some dent because of

this

moved

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. I felt so upset

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because

this

desk is one of my favourite items in the

house

. I kindly ask your assistance with my prompt. I would like you to provide some additional training for your member. Please ensure

this

matter will not happen again in the future. Yours faithfully, Andrew

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

193 words

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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist. To what extent do you agree?

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