Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problem can it cause?
Nowadays,
latest
trend in trying different Add an article
the latest
outfits
have
become popular. Even some individuals spend Correct subject-verb agreement
has
thousand
of rupees Correct your spelling
thousands
behind
luxurious style clothing. It seems to me that, youngsters are adapting Change preposition
on
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the personality
personality
of their favourite actors, but Fix the agreement mistake
personalities
this
could become addiction
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an addiction
in
spending Change preposition
to
extreme
amount of money Add an article
an extreme
over
stylish clothes.
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on
To begin
with, social media have become a not only daily use of subtle app
but Fix the agreement mistake
apps
also
newer
way to get updated with current reality. Add an article
a newer
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outcome of new technology can provides
daily updates Change the verb form
provide
of
our favourite celebritiesChange preposition
on
,
and insights about what they wear and how they live to adept Remove the comma
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overall
lifestyle. For instance
, whatever
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apply
the
designer clothes Correct article usage
apply
have
worn by famous people are extremely expensive to buy for normal individuals like us. Unnecessary verb
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However
, fans after seeing their lovely actors, they
would Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
like to try these branded outfits
to see how would they look. Because of, this
obsession over
luxurious items Change preposition
with
youngster
make themselves Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
to
fall into traps, which either give them satisfaction or get dissatisfied for overspending.
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apply
On the other hand
, of
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if
youngster
have enough knowledge in dressing sense, Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters
then
they would not fall into these useless traps. In contrast
, as we have seen that
over the Correct word choice
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last
decade, usage of social media platform
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platforms
such
as Instagram, Facebook or twitter
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have
become excessive. Change the verb form
has
Whereas
, celebrities appeared in public conference
with their sponsored Fix the agreement mistake
conferences
outfits
, but
we get excited to see Correct word choice
apply
ourself
in those same Correct pronoun usage
ourselves
outfits
,
and imagine ourselves as an actor. Remove the comma
apply
For example
, actors get paid to wear their designer clothing, but for us unless we pay for it. Whether it’s normal clothing or luxurious designer outfits
.
In conclusion, copying behaviour and dialogs
or doing mimicry won’t be Change the spelling
dialogues
problem
for Add an article
a problem
young
generation. Yet buying expensive products after seeing Correct article usage
the young
other
will be out of wellness. In my opinion, it’s an individual decision to what to wear or not but Fix the agreement mistake
others
obsession
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the obsession
behind
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with
every thing
is madness for your own personality.Correct your spelling
everything
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