The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

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The chart illustrates how favourite television shows in Europe, are different in separate age groups.

According to

the graph, Cartoons are most loved by 29% of teens between the age of 11-15, and News are the least favourite at

this

age.

However

, young individuals who are between 21-25 love to watch the press release 23% of the time but don't like to watch animations (only 4%),

also

, 16-20 teenagers statics for animations are 18%, and 19% for reports.

On the other hand

, Feature films are popular in all three, 18% for 11-15, 23% for 16-20 and 20% for 21-25 people.

Moreover

, TV dramas are not that much popular in any of the groups, 8% in 11-15 kids, 10% in 16-20 teens, and 13% in 21-25 adults.

Furthermore

, Sports are one of the things that everyone would love to watch, 22% of 11-15 kids, 18% of 16-20 teenagers, and 21% of 21-25 young humans. Next are Soap Operas, which people have mutual feelings about them, with 17% for 11-15, 12% for 16-20, and 19% for 21-25s. In conclusion, the table indicates Feature films are the common TV program that people prefer to watch, unlike Cartoons which as you grow old, you don't like as much, interestingly the opposite happens to the news. TV dramas are never liked! Soap Operas and Sports are s.th that you would like to see, no matter how old you are.

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