The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
The line graph illustrates the ratio of tourists to England who preferred to visit the
Art
Use synonyms
Gallery
, Use synonyms
Pavillion
, Use synonyms
Pier
or Festival in Brighton between 1980 and 2010. Use synonyms
Overall
, all four attractions experienced fluctuations throughout the period. Linking Words
Pier
and Use synonyms
Pavillion
completed the period at a higher rate than the beginning, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
Art
Use synonyms
Gallery
and Festival had a lower percentage.
Between 1980 and 1995, the percentage of visitors to the Use synonyms
Pavillion
rose sharply from around 24% to a high Use synonyms
point
of merely 48% Use synonyms
while
the Festival experienced a slight fall from %30 to approximately 25%. The Linking Words
Art
Use synonyms
Gallery
had rapid variations till 1990 and almost remained the same for the subsequent 5 years at the Use synonyms
point
of 20%, in comparison Use synonyms
Pier
had slighter fluctuations and changed around the 12% until the year 1995.
After 1995, Use synonyms
Pavillion
's popularity decreased dramatically to one-third Use synonyms
while
still remaining the most popular option in Brighton. The ratio of Festival had a gradual growth to merely 27% which makes the place the second most popular attraction. Following that, Linking Words
Pier
experienced an upward trend till 2010 and outraced the Use synonyms
point
of 20%, Use synonyms
in contrast
to Linking Words
Art
Use synonyms
Gallery
which ended up at the low Use synonyms
point
of approximately 8%.Use synonyms
Submitted by mirayturan01 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words art, gallery, pavillion, pier, point with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼