the graph below shows the changing patterns of access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
The graph provides information regarding the patterns, which changed
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the availability of new technologies in homes in the UK. The rate of all four modern devices increased over a 14-year period starting in 1994.
In 1994, about 48 per Linking Words
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of homes had access to a CD player. Use synonyms
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figure rose slightly over the years to reach 90 per Linking Words
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in 2004. There was a little change in percentage after that. As regards the rate of mobile phones, it has experienced a gradual increase to nearly 80 per Use synonyms
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in 2004, which was the second rank in terms of the highest percentage in houses. After that, Use synonyms
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figure slumped until 2008.
Turning to houses with Internet connections, the proportion rose slightly from 10 per Linking Words
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in 1998 to just over 70 per Use synonyms
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in 2008. No figures are given for DVD players before 2002. The percentage of accessibility to DVD players went up dramatically over a 6-year period ending in 2008.Use synonyms
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