it is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

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Risk is a kind of thing
that is
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lifes
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, but at the same time is dangerous.
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accompany
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through
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his/her
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, either personal or professional,
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it is impossible to live without risking It is true that sometimes hasty decisions can lead to failures and regrets.
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, come to think of it, there will not be any promotion and development in
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if
people
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do not take
risks
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. Not venturing means to sit on the same
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, which is considered to be
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disagreeable perspective.
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reason why
people
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are afraid of any
risks
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is that they are scared to lose what they have. Sometimes ventures cannot only finish with
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fail
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but,
also
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, affect
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’s well-being,
for example
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, rain positive relationships with
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colleagues
, friends or relatives. Anyway,
risks
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have more upsides than it is
conventioned
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conventional
convention
. Usually,
people
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are
teached
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lessons from all negative situations in their
lifes
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lives
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,
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and gain more knowledge in that way. These lessons can
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assist
them in the future in
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their career progression.
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, taking
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is really important in case
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people
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want to improve the quality of their
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because developments cannot occur without steps which
people
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will do in order
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to
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achieve their goals.
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,
according to
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recent statistics,
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of successful
people
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, especially
businessman
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businessmen
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, always had been taking
risks
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and got failed,
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, continued their
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work
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or studies. In conclusion, ventures
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are one
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of the most important parts of
people
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’s
lifes
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lives
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. Jane Austen wrote once in „ Pride and
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” - „ If we do not venture, someone else will”.
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it is better to take
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a chance
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now, than regret
later
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it later
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.
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  • Innovation
  • Challenges
  • Self-discovery
  • Resilience
  • Uncertainty
  • Consequences
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  • Stagnation
  • Regret
  • Comfort zone
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