Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

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Foreign languages are always obstacles for
people
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who want to visit or live in other countries. In my perspective, I agree with
this
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sentence for the reasons specified below‏.‏
Firstly
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, it is important to know the language of the
country
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you are going to visit.
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, you will
face
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social problems. It will be difficult for you to communicate with
people
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. You will find it hard
searching
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to search
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for friends to talk with,
make
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who make
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you happy, and help you if you are in a tough situation.
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, if you did not find friends you will feel lonely,
unhappy
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and unhappy
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, you might be in a depression, and you will not find
help
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the help
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if
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you need. It is essential for a person to have friends who support him in
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life.
Secondly
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, you will
face
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practical problems.
For example
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, it will be difficult to find a place to live; to find
job
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a job
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so you can earn money.
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, it is important to know how to use transportation; to know the name of important places
; and
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, and
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to know the names of
street
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streets
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or
otherwise
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you may get lost.
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, it will be hard to find healthy food or restaurants; you will
face
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problems like how to reach the hospital and
to
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apply
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communicate with them.
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, you may
face
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a
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fraud with criminal
people
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. In conclusion, I recommend for those
people
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who want to visit a foreign
country
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to
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educate themselves about the law and the system of the
country
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.
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, you will get in trouble in that
country
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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