You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Smoking,

such

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is such

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a habit,

despite

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and despite

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knowing the consequence, there are

people

who never

quits

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quit

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. Smoking, which is

also

known as the "cancer stick", not only harms the smokers

,

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but

also

the surrounding

people

and the environment. Especially, smoking inside a room can be hazardous.

However

, in many countries it is still allowed to

smoke

inside establishments,

hence

, increasing passive smokers. I strongly believe, smoking inside a building should be prohibited and in

this

essay

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I will try to elucidate the reasons behind my belief.

Firstly

, smoking inside a chamber where ventilation is no way near

the

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efficiency

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of

an

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open space; can pollute the air and

unbreathable

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be unbreathable

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due to

excessive

amount

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amounts

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of CO2.

Such

environment

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can cause serious heart and lung diseases

,

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and even death.

Moreover

,

people

who

smoke

in confined spaces, inhale enough

second hand

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smoke

to add

significantly

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health risks from smoking.

Secondly

, non-smokers too can inflict the same illness from

second hand

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second-hand

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smoking; leading to a potential heart attack. Young children are affected more than anyone by inhaling the

smoke

exhaled by a smoker. Their immune system can be damaged causing frequent illness, and hospitalization

as a result

.

Finally

, lingering smoking

odors

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can

also

be harmful to a person. Smoking in a compact space always leaves a bad smell and the particles from the

second hand

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second-hand

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tobacco

smoke

can settle in dust and on surfaces and remain there long after the

smoke

is gone. These particles can mix with the gases in the air and cause cancer. In conclusion, considering the above reasons, those were proven to be health hazardous, can raise health

risk

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risks

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, and immature death of any person, smoking inside a building should be prohibited for

greater

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the greater

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good and for the betterment of the majority of

people

.