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Writing Samples
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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •Describe the item •Explain where and when your left it •Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Alexander and I am one of your loyal customers. I am writing
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 letter regarding my
bag
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 that was lost on your
train
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 yesterday. Allow me to explain the details. Yesterday, I used your
train
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 from Kisaran to Medan from 3 PM to 5PM. During my trips, I brought a
bag
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 that contains some of the utmost important items. My
bag
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 has green colour with white strips on the front that
containing
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 my laptop, wallets, and company files. After I arrived in Medan, I
had
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found that my
bag
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 did not in place.
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, I had
go
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 to customer service to make permission to let me saw the
train
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 CCTV, and we found out that my precious item had been stolen when the
train
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 stop in Binjai at 4.30 PM Because of
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 issue, I kindly ask for your assistance with my prompt. I would like your help to resolve my problems by make a letter to a police officer. Yours faithfully, Alexander
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