You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •Describe the item •Explain where and when your left it •Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Alexander and I am one of your loyal customers. I am writing

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letter regarding my

bag

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that was lost on your

train

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yesterday. Allow me to explain the details. Yesterday, I used your

train

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from Kisaran to Medan from 3 PM to 5PM. During my trips, I brought a

bag

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that contains some of the utmost important items. My

bag

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has green colour with white strips on the front that

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contain

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my laptop, wallets, and company files. After I arrived in Medan, I

had

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found that my

bag

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did not in place.

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, I had

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to go

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to customer service to make permission to let me saw the

train

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CCTV, and we found out that my precious item had been stolen when the

train

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stop in Binjai at 4.30 PM Because of

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issue, I kindly ask for your assistance with my prompt. I would like your help to resolve my problems by make a letter to a police officer. Yours faithfully, Alexander

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

176 words

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •Describe the item •Explain where and when your left it •Say what action you would like the company to take

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Every country in the world has its own road rules, but many drivers don’t obey them. What do you think are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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