You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •Describe the item •Explain where and when your left it •Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to introduce myself, my name is Alexander and I am one of your loyal customers. I am writing

this

letter regarding my

bag

that was lost on your

train

yesterday. Allow me to explain the details. Yesterday, I used your

train

from Kisaran to Medan from 3 PM to 5PM. During my trips, I brought a

bag

that contains some of the utmost important items. My

bag

has green colour with white strips on the front that

containing

Wrong verb form

contain

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my laptop, wallets, and company files. After I arrived in Medan, I

had

Unnecessary verb

apply

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found that my

bag

did not in place.

In addition

, I had

Fix the infinitive

to go

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to customer service to make permission to let me saw the

train

CCTV, and we found out that my precious item had been stolen when the

train

stop in Binjai at 4.30 PM Because of

this

issue, I kindly ask for your assistance with my prompt. I would like your help to resolve my problems by make a letter to a police officer. Yours faithfully, Alexander

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7 paragraphs

176 words

7.50

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter •Describe the item •Explain where and when your left it •Say what action you would like the company to take

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