In many countires, there are an increasing number of private cars. What are the advantages and disadvtanges of this trend?
It is quite common these days for the increasing
number
of private Use synonyms
cars
in many countries to transfer. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of Linking Words
this
trend.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why increasing Linking Words
Use synonyms
number
of private Correct article usage
the number
cars
is beneficial. A common reason is Use synonyms
that
Correct word choice
apply
the
Change the word
their
flexible
in moving and travelling. Nowadays, we can see that there are Replace the word
flexibility
variety
of tourist bus companies and airlines to chooseAdd an article
a variety
.
Change preposition
from.
However
, we have to book the ticket and stand at the station at the right time. Sometimes it Linking Words
is annoy
because Change the verb form
is annoying
the
Change preposition
of the
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
on the way to Use synonyms
station
or unexpected Add an article
the station
works
. Fix the agreement mistake
work
For instance
, you and your family are on the way to the station. Unfortunately, there is a terrible Linking Words
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
and you are late. You have to rebook the ticket and the Use synonyms
clearly
fact is that you feel Change the adverb
clear
discourage
and lose interest in your trip. Change the verb form
discouraged
Whereas
, if you have your private car, you don't have to worry about the time. You can start your vacation every time you would like. Another factor can be that Linking Words
cars
can avoid bad weather Use synonyms
such
as heavy rain and hot sun. Linking Words
Cars
are designed to make their driver and owner feel comfortable and Use synonyms
relax
. Wrong verb form
relaxed
Therefore
, it is Linking Words
equiped
roof, Correct your spelling
equipped
conditiner
and Correct your spelling
conditioner
variety
of Correct article usage
a variety
device
to serve Fix the agreement mistake
devices
their
owner. Correct pronoun usage
its
For example
, there is nothing Linking Words
happen
to you when it is raining Correct subject-verb agreement
happens
while
you are in a car. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
motorcycle
is another issue and it is too annoying.
Add an article
the motorcycle
a motorcycle
On the other hand
, there are Linking Words
Use synonyms
number
of disadvantages of the Change the article
a number
the number
growth
Replace the word
growing
number
of private Use synonyms
cars
that people should take into consideration. One obvious drawback is Use synonyms
environment
pollution. Nowadays, there are several Replace the word
environmental
of
electric Change preposition
apply
cars
but Use synonyms
fuel engine
Add a hyphen
fuel-engine
cars
Use synonyms
still
more popular. That's why if the Add a missing verb
are still
number
of Use synonyms
cars
Use synonyms
are continue
Change the verb form
continues
increase
, the situation of Fix the infinitive
to increase
environment
will be worse. One good illustration of Correct article usage
the environment
this
is the Linking Words
increasing
Replace the word
increase
of
car exhaust in the world. Change preposition
in
According to
the International Environment Protecting Organization. Every 100000 Linking Words
cars
are sold and used, the rate of carbon in the worldwide air increase Use synonyms
3,7
%. Another negative effect is the Change preposition
by 3,7
increasing
Replace the word
increase
of
Change preposition
in
traffic
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
jam
. The more Fix the agreement mistake
jams
cars
are sold, the more Use synonyms
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
happened. It is because there Use synonyms
aren't
enough spaceChange the verb form
isn't
,
Change preposition
on, road
road
to move so Correct article usage
the road
traffic
Use synonyms
jam
will happen more often. The evidence of Use synonyms
this
fact is the data Linking Words
of
the Change preposition
on
number
of vehicles Use synonyms
transport
Wrong verb form
transported
in
the main road Change preposition
on
according to
Vnexpress. More than 700 Linking Words
cars
per Use synonyms
kilometer
. Change the spelling
kilometre
That is
a terrible Linking Words
number
.
In conclusion, the growth of Use synonyms
cars
Use synonyms
number
could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked.Use synonyms
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