In many countires, there are an increasing number of private cars. What are the advantages and disadvtanges of this trend?

It is quite common these days for the increasing

number

of private

cars

in many countries to transfer.

This

essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of

this

trend. On the one hand, there are several reasons why increasing

number

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of private

cars

is beneficial. A common reason is

that

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the

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their

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flexible

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flexibility

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in moving and travelling. Nowadays, we can see that there are

variety

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a variety

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of tourist bus companies and airlines to choose

.

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from.

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However

, we have to book the ticket and stand at the station at the right time. Sometimes it

is annoy

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is annoying

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because

the

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of the

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traffic

jam

on the way to

station

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the station

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or unexpected

works

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work

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.

For instance

, you and your family are on the way to the station. Unfortunately, there is a terrible

traffic

jam

and you are late. You have to rebook the ticket and the

clearly

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fact is that you feel

discourage

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and lose interest in your trip.

Whereas

, if you have your private car, you don't have to worry about the time. You can start your vacation every time you would like. Another factor can be that

cars

can avoid bad weather

such

as heavy rain and hot sun.

Cars

are designed to make their driver and owner feel comfortable and

relax

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.

Therefore

, it is

equiped

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equipped

roof,

conditiner

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conditioner

and

variety

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of

device

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devices

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to serve

their

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its

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owner.

For example

, there is nothing

happen

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happens

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to you when it is raining

while

you are in a car.

However

,

motorcycle

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the motorcycle

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is another issue and it is too annoying.

On the other hand

, there are

number

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a number

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of disadvantages of the

growth

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growing

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number

of private

cars

that people should take into consideration. One obvious drawback is

environment

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environmental

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pollution. Nowadays, there are several

of

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apply

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electric

cars

but

fuel engine

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fuel-engine

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cars

still

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are still

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more popular. That's why if the

number

of

cars

are continue

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continues

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increase

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, the situation of

environment

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will be worse. One good illustration of

this

is the

increasing

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increase

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of

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in

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car exhaust in the world.

According to

the International Environment Protecting Organization. Every 100000

cars

are sold and used, the rate of carbon in the worldwide air increase

3,7

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by 3,7

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%. Another negative effect is the

increasing

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increase

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of

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in

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traffic

jam

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jams

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. The more

cars

are sold, the more

traffic

jam

happened. It is because there

aren't

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isn't

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enough space

,

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on, road

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road

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the road

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to move so

traffic

jam

will happen more often. The evidence of

this

fact is the data

of

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on

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the

number

of vehicles

transport

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in

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on

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the main road

according to

Vnexpress. More than 700

cars

per

kilometer

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kilometre

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.

That is

a terrible

number

. In conclusion, the growth of

cars

number

could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked.