In many countires, there are an increasing number of private cars. What are the advantages and disadvtanges of this trend?

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It is quite common these days for the increasing
number
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of private
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in many countries to transfer.
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essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
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trend. On the one hand, there are several reasons why increasing
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number
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the number
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of private
cars
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is beneficial. A common reason is
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the
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flexible
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in moving and travelling. Nowadays, we can see that there are
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of tourist bus companies and airlines to choose
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from.
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, we have to book the ticket and stand at the station at the right time. Sometimes it
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because
the
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traffic
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jam
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on the way to
station
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the station
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or unexpected
works
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.
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, you and your family are on the way to the station. Unfortunately, there is a terrible
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jam
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and you are late. You have to rebook the ticket and the
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fact is that you feel
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and lose interest in your trip.
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, if you have your private car, you don't have to worry about the time. You can start your vacation every time you would like. Another factor can be that
cars
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can avoid bad weather
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as heavy rain and hot sun.
Cars
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are designed to make their driver and owner feel comfortable and
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.
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, it is
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equipped
roof,
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conditioner
and
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a variety
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of
device
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devices
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to serve
their
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its
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owner.
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, there is nothing
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happens
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to you when it is raining
while
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you are in a car.
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,
motorcycle
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the motorcycle
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is another issue and it is too annoying.
On the other hand
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, there are
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number
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a number
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of disadvantages of the
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number
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of private
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that people should take into consideration. One obvious drawback is
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pollution. Nowadays, there are several
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electric
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but
fuel engine
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cars
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still
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more popular. That's why if the
number
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of
cars
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are continue
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increase
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, the situation of
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the environment
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will be worse. One good illustration of
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is the
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of
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car exhaust in the world.
According to
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the International Environment Protecting Organization. Every 100000
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are sold and used, the rate of carbon in the worldwide air increase
3,7
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%. Another negative effect is the
increasing
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of
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traffic
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jam
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. The more
cars
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are sold, the more
traffic
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jam
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happened. It is because there
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enough space
,
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on, road
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road
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the road
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to move so
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jam
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will happen more often. The evidence of
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fact is the data
of
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the
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of vehicles
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in
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the main road
according to
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Vnexpress. More than 700
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per
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.
That is
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a terrible
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. In conclusion, the growth of
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number
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could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked.
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