Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Everybody knows that we could be very fest when
petrol
joins our life. We can go to a very
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with
petrol
. pollution problems are not only about
petrol
or traffic. İt is about factories, our lıfe style or gas of sera all
effects
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them. That's why
i
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disagree , increasing the
price
of
petrol
best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution. İt has some reasons. First, if we do
increase
the
price
of
petrol
, it makes increases all things the
price
.
For example
,
traffictrafic
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traffic traffic
the
price
make high it makes increases
transporter
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the transporter
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of
price
,
holidays
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of
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price
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prices
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, fruits and vertebral
of
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price
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prices
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,
cargo
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and cargo
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of
price
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prices
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.
According
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the example, making the
price
of traffic is not a good idea and it is not
solution
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to our problem.
Second,
if we make
increase
the
price
of
petrol
it will affect the
price
of factoring's goods because many factories
use
petrol
for proses
energy
.
For instance
, toy
facroris
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factories
use
a lot of
petrol
and
petrol
's
cemical
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chemical
comical
, making the
increase
in
petrol
means is buy toys is very expensive for children. İt make our life bad ekonomy.
To sum up
,
increase
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the
price
of
petrol
is not a good situation
to
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pollution. İn my opinion, we should
use
clean
energy
like solar power, and wind
energy
. İt will make our air clean and good solution for pollutıon. We should develop alternative
energy
and
use
it all in our life
for example
, in our cars, factories and at home. At that time we won't need to
use
petrol
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  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
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  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
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