Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city area as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted. Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.

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the population rapidly by double fold the past.

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depict some manual solutions.

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with, there are many

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reasons

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for that rapid

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humanity

increase

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increases

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fast

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especially

if there are no illnesses.

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, in old generations millions of

people

died because

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ill and there is no treatment for them, their doctors cannot solve their danger

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extinct

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less

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wars and

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the

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peace in the world is a second

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to

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that

increase

which happen nowadays.

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, if there are no wars we did not need

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soldiers

,

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and most

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nations will

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to maximise their economy and industries as well. In

term

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of solutions, there are many advance countries like China,

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country of billion

people

, who put some rules to minimize the population in the area, China

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be enough and farmers could not feed all

people

, so we as a government we shall list some role to

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borning in the area ' any family must not bring more

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two

child

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. eventually,

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lesser the percentage of

population

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the population

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by 70 percent by

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of

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Cambridge

university

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.

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,

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the material in

area

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and

spread

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the

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poverty will make

people

migration

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and cannot marriage

it

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is consider

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prety

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pretty

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, the

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did not find any eat, so they will force themselves to travel to modern cities to seek

for

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jobs. In conclusion, there are many

reason

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to

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for

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global

issue

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. It is

also

true that

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solution

will reduce the ratio in

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postive

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positive

way.