Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always good. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Change
is inevitable and comes into our lives at every phase. Many people feel that change
should be embraced without hesitation, while
others believe it is better to avoid new situations. In my opinion, though change
can be positive in specific contexts, it should not be pursued as valuable in itself. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall discuss both views and later give reasons to support a personal point of view. Those in favour of change
argue it is nearly always positive. Examples of good changes might include moving to a new city, starting a new job, finding a new life companion, or even something as simple as getting a pet. Each of these decisions is a means of addressing a desire or feeling of dissatisfaction. One
change
that has become prevalent in recent decades relates to nutrition and exercise. Such
lifestyle changes are based on research showing the importance of a healthy diet and identified
foods low in certain kinds of fats and carbohydrates. Combined with weekly exercise, the results are superior fitness and improved longevity. Wrong verb form
identifying
However
, change
is, more often than not, a means of disregarding one
's responsibilities. Many individuals change
jobs or leave relationships simply because they have lost their passion. This
effort to re-energize is typically unsuccessful because outward changes do little to alleviate internal problems. Therefore
, change
is either an excuse to justify selfish behaviour or a temporary and superficial solution in most cases. The best-known example of this
would be the classic 'mid-life crisis' that mainly affects men as they age and decide their life is not fulfilling their most basic desires. Ultimately, I believe that most people would be better served by focusing on improving their current situation rather than seeking transitory and exaggerated new experiences. Thus
, in conclusion, change
should not be sought to escape one
's primary duties. Change
should be an organic process, and individuals shouldn't pursue it as a goal. Thus
, in conclusion, change
should not be sought to escape one
's primary duties. Change
should be an organic process, and individuals shouldn't pursue it as a goal.Submitted by mohamadaliansari1998 on
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