The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.

The maps show about the transformation of Felixstone city fro 1967 to 2001.
The two maps illustrate the different transformations of Felixstowe City from 1967 to 2001. In general , there are many differences between the two maps especially the below side and upside on the right.
However
, there were no changes in Golf courses, cafes and high streets between 1967 and 2001. Looking at the maps for more details, the shape of the hotel changed in 2001 and it added a car park. What is more, there are two sides of shops in 1967,
while
the right side changed to apartments in 2001 and the number of shops on the left side increased by about 3.
Moreover
, the fish market, Marina and Peria was available in 1967 but in 2001 it was replaced with a private and a public beach. What is more, the Dunes Place was bigger in 2001 than in 1967 and it provided wind turbines .
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