The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart presents data about the ratio of the weekly earnings expenditure by households in one country in the years 1968 and 2018.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that families spent most of their weekly income on food in 1968 but the situation changed since
then
and they used more
money
on leisure and housing in 2018. The families spent 35 % of their weekly earnings on food
while
spending the same amount of
money
(10%) on housing, clothing and footwear. On each of the following activities, fuel and power, household
goods
, personal
goods
, transport and leisure, they used less than 10 % of their weekly earnings in 1968. In 2018 the situation changed dramatically where households spent less than 15% on food
while
using about 22% of their income on leisure. The rate of
money
spent on housing significantly increased since 1968 and arrived from 10% to 20% in 2018. The amount of
money
spent on transport
also
increased since
then
and arrived from just under 10% to about 15% in 2018.
While
the percentage of
money
spent on fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal
goods
experienced a slight increase since the beginning of the period, the rate of weekly income spent on household
goods
remained unchanged in 2018.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words money, goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • compare
  • spending patterns
  • allocated
  • weekly income
  • significant changes
  • essential items
  • food
  • housing
  • clothing
  • leisure
  • communication
  • increase
  • decrease
  • twofold rise
  • substantial increase
  • quadrupling
  • declined
  • food and drink
  • slight increase
  • prioritizing
  • necessities
  • transitioned
  • portio
  • non-essential items
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